alt Hacker NewsThe goal of truncating the sentences in that way was precisely to increase the suspense a bit, but I believe I miserably failed, making it just less readable.
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Trixter • yesterday at 6:07 PM
Worse, the formatting failed. Lines are breaking before the sentence is over, leading to two words in the next line, then a new line. (Linux, Chrome)
eks391 • yesterday at 1:37 AM
Just because they didn't see your vision doesn't mean it wasn't good. You clearly had an intent with it.
For my anecdote, it worked for me and I didn't even notice the spacing until they pointed it out.
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Not OP: for what it's worth I understood your intent, and it didn't bother me