alt Hacker NewsOne character responds to the stimuli of another character. Character A says something mean to character B and character B responds that he feels hurt.
One character responds to the stimuli of another character. Character A says something mean to character B and character B responds that he feels hurt.
I think you are confused here. The author, a dynamic system, perhaps felt the emotion of the characters as she charted through the course of the story.
But the story itself is a static snapshot of that dynamic system. Similar to how a photograph of a person is a static capture from a dynamic moment. The person in the photo has qualia, but the image of them (almost certainly) does not.
At least at a baseline, we would expect anything with qualia to be dynamic rather than static.