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the_afyesterday at 8:23 PM1 replyview on HN

Out of curiosity, did you redact this with AI?

It has all the telltale signs: lots of em-dashes but also "punched up" paragraphs, a lot of them end with a zinger, e.g.

> Amazon folks are slightly more insulated, but not by much. The old Seattle deal—Amazon treats you poorly but pays you more—only masks the rot.

or

> Seattle has talent as good as anywhere. But in San Francisco, people still believe they can change the world—so sometimes they actually do.

Once or twice can be coincidence, but a full article of it reads a tiny bit like AI slop.


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mips_avataryesterday at 8:46 PM

I wrote it by hand but I had an AI do some edits. I got the m dash drilled into me by my creative writing teacher in college.

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