Right, you do what you think is best. I'm in no position to tell you what to do. Having said that, it comes off as robotic and impersonal. Personally, I'd rather read you trying to write with your own words what you wanted to write. That is, if you're not AI yourself which there are high chances of and I'm leaning on that theory.
确实,我自己也非常讨厌AI味的文字,很希望我的英文能和中文一样好。只是可能还要好几年时间吧。