I like the design, it's fresh and have good visual hierarchy (cool be improved in place but overall very nice). The content is fine for a first iteration I suppose. The tone is a bit aggressive sometime, I get you want to give a NO-BS focused mindset but maybe a tad over doing it. Also visually I think you could make more use the monetization impact of the game decisions - maybe that would help with "focused" branding without having to resort a condescending tone in some places. You probably will want a bit more nuance - businesses have multiple growth path and there isn't just once recipe for things but tradeoff are real and choices have impact - it is more important to understand the impacts of the tradeoff that to be locked in on some mantras. But again, all these are improvements that you will probably navigate yourself :)