You are going so deep with abstract terms that your text becomes a special shorthand you think is clear but is anything but clear.

Stop talking about “exclusion” and “pressure” etc and use direct words about what is happening in the model.

Otherwise, even your attempts at explaining what you have said need more explanation.

And as the sibling comment points out, start by stating what you are actually doing, in concrete not “the math is the same so I assume you can guess how it applies if you happen to know the same math and the same models” terms. Which is asking everyone else, most anyone, to read your mind, not your text.

There is a tremendous difference between connections you see that help you understand, vs. assuming others can somehow infer connections and knowledge they don’t already have. The difference between an explanation and incoherence.