You're editorializing the headline, aside from your vague phrasing for "margin" (actually gross margin) and "Services [segment]" which has had gross margins >66% since FY20.
Better to reflect the actual headline and then add a comment.
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This is the SaaS division. Similar at GOOG, MSFT, CRM, etc. have similar gross margins.
I don't understand what you want to say with your comment.
The article and the submitted HN post both appear to have the same title to me: "Margin Call".
What are you talking about? Did one or the other have a different title when you wrote your comment?