Books and newspapers have had editors for centuries. It is just code review for the written word.
[It looks like MS Word 97 had the ability to detect passive voice as well, so we're talking 30 year old technology there that predates LLMs -- how far down the Butlerian Jihad are we going with this?]
Editors are mostly tasked with maintaining a consistent style and standard.
There is no need for that here beyond maybe spellcheck. Use your own thoughts, voice, and words.