alt Hacker NewsI would edit sentences like this:
"Erlang is the strongest form of the isolation argument, and it deserves to be taken seriously, which is why what happens next matters."
It doesn't add much, and it has this condescending and pretentious LLM tone. For me as a reader, it distracts from an otherwise interesting article.
That what the only place that made me stumble, because “what happens next” doesn’t really make sense in that context.