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jjmarryesterday at 9:54 PM3 repliesview on HN

Your polishing work made a difference! The prose is like every other work of science fiction I've read.

It's written like this is a dystopia but billing $180/45 minutes in rural low cost of living area sounds awesome. And the choreographer billing "more than a truck" for three weeks? The dream!


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ByThyGracetoday at 12:20 AM

> The prose is like every other work of science fiction I've read.

Well, then, you gotta move on to reading better science fiction. Because this is pretty damn bland. I gave up after 2 minutes because of it. Kinda feel vindicated after coming to the comments.

I can see it working for casual readers, which is why it's already an editorial problem. Imagine having to sift through a growing number of faux writers sending publishers AI generated prose.

ghewgillyesterday at 10:45 PM

The story didn't mention what had happened to inflation in the meantime. A dozen eggs costs $32.

brianmyesterday at 11:08 PM

Huh, I got cottage core, not dystopia!