I am not sure what your complaint is. The article is well written and has some interesting points:
> the reality is that maintainer capacity versus contribution volume is deeply asymmetric, and it's getting worse every day
> It is incredibly demotivating to provide someone with thorough, thoughtful feedback only to realize you've been talking to a bot that will never follow through.
It's the exact same complaint as in the article:
> I started noticing patterns. The quality wasn't there. The descriptions had a templated, mechanical feel. And something subtler was missing: the excitement.
The article has mechanically correct prose; that's not the same as well-written, and that's the topic of the article itself.