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cwnythtoday at 4:44 AM1 replyview on HN

Cf. Vonnegut's rule #4 of good writing:

> Every sentence must do one of two things—reveal character or advance the action.

Or Quintilian's praise of Demosthenes and Cicero: "To Demosthenes nothing can be added, but from Cicero nothing can be taken away."


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cobbzillatoday at 5:12 AM

Is there no room for describing the setting? Must every utterance that sets the atmosphere also advance the plot or reveal character? Is there no room for mood?

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