This is AI, but I can’t prove it, lol. :) The bulleted lists that are too short both in total list length and text per list item length. littles drama headers as parent noted.

To your point, this would register as “human bloviating for word count subtly” if llms didn’t exist, and at this point is probably the most useful feedback. I doubt it’s 100% one-shot AI, but someone definitely optimized it in parts, but the AI heard “concise” as “bullets and short sentences.”