It appears that your company experienced an incident during which a blog entry was made available in which readers became informed about certain information about a server condition that resulted in certain users receiving a barrage of indirect clauses etc. etc. etc.

Be more direct. Be concise. This blog post sounds like a cagey customer service CYA response. It defeats the purpose of publishing a blog post showing that you’re mature, aware, accountable, and transparent.

The problem is that these visible errors make us wonder what other errors in the post are less visible. Fixing them doesn’t fix the process that led to them.