This is so insightfully and powerfully written I had literal chills running down my spine by the end.
What a horrible world we live in where the author of great writing like this has to sit and be accused of "being AI slop" simply because they use grammar and rhetoric well.
I was completely riveted the whole read. The description of Collins' dilemma is the first time I've seen an actual real world scenario described that might cause him to return to Earth alone.
If an LLM wrote that, then I no longer oppose LLM art.