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quantummagicyesterday at 5:48 PM4 repliesview on HN

Why is writing "it's not X, it's Y" a bad thing? Other than it happens to be used a lot by LLM's, it seems like a fine language construct. It's not like it's new; it was used plenty before the time of LLMs too. In my opinion, we shouldn't let the LLM companies claim parts of the English language for themselves, and make it effectively unusable by everyone else. That's what is happening because of this pervasive hatred for anything remotely associated with AI.


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netsharcyesterday at 6:11 PM

The "not X, it's Y" creates dramatic tension, "It wasn't a pimple, it was a tumor", but fucking AI overuses it for everything like they're doing a fucking TED-talk, despite being vapid, e.g. "This isn't a plan to spend half a day in New York, this is an itinerary for the best of what the city's history and culture has to offer."

Also: https://www.instagram.com/reel/DaQwB1IOdhx/

Not that most TED talks aren't vapid: https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2013/dec/30/we-nee...

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zahlmanyesterday at 6:45 PM

It only happens twice in this article and they're both fairly reasonable. There are many other tells that I find a lot worse. In particular, "The Setup" is an awful choice for the first h2-level heading, especially when the description is that short. Better not to have a separate heading for the teaser at all.

(Also better not to lead with a 1.6 MB hero image that's completely irrelevant to the topic, for less than a thousand words of text that are still probably at least twice as many as merited; but that's probably not the LLM's fault, it's just how people do web stuff nowadays.)

NikxDayesterday at 6:05 PM

It has simply become a "marker" for LLM style, so I'd argue authors caring about their text will now just use a different structure to get the meaning across. That's just part of being a writer. You can choose to write it, and it'll be correct, readers (including me) will just conclude its most likely an LLM and often stop reading.

foxglaciertoday at 2:24 AM

If the author was honestly trying to communicate, he would believe that the reader is already expecting it to be X, but it tends to get used for things where you didn't even consider it to be X in the first place. So it's not clarifying a potential misunderstanding, just making it sound surprising even if it isn't. You're left with the feeling that something's importantly different from expectations even when it's not.

In this case, I think it's fine. It points out that the victim only has to trust YouTube itself, not a stranger posting on it (eg, if it was listed as an example of a user comment). But I'm desensitized to everybody else abusing that construct so it didn't communicate that to me.