Cool tech, but the writing flags as AI.
em dash, staccato
no thing 1, no thing 2, just thing 3
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Please don't harm your work like this. Let it speak for itself + add your authentic voice.
Ah is that the phrase for this bullshit, staccato? It's tiring to read.
Also, the hardest part on the reader imo: Language that conveys an unearned sense of importance and emotion in appropriate places.