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handfuloflighttoday at 7:38 PM5 repliesview on HN

Okay here's one of the outputs:

> Before you start, make sure that your AWS credentials are correct. If they are not, S3 rejects the upload with a permission error.

Wouldn't it be better to write:

Before start, ensure AWS credentials are correct. Otherwise, S3 rejects uploads with permission error.


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harshrealitytoday at 9:24 PM

The example is unambiguous. Your modification is ambiguous at best. <failure to ensure aws credentials are correct> != <aws credentials are incorrect>

qznctoday at 9:39 PM

Violates rule 4.2: Do not omit words or use contractions to shorten sentences. Keep articles, keep "that".

stavrostoday at 9:16 PM

No, how is that better?

trhwaytoday at 9:30 PM

Which one would do better in a college essay? I think the original one, and it has higher word count.