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whythismatterstoday at 8:13 PM3 repliesview on HN

How does it compare to previous (human) translations, what is the regurgitation level? In any case, lots of em dashes, so mission accomplished to bring it up to contemporary standards.


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ktzartoday at 9:00 PM

Emily Wilson's translation is way better, more modern and adequate to present-day readers and, probably more context aware.

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spinchangetoday at 9:22 PM

I find it to be cross between Richmond Lattimore and Ian Johnston. There are line-level annotations that discuss translation choices and a hyperlinked index w/ Latinate pronunciations was also built from scratch.

suddenlybananastoday at 8:34 PM

https://theclaudyssey.com/read/book-01.html#n1

The first line is a crappy mishmash of Lattimore and Fagles.

Lattimore: >Tell me, Muse, of the man of many ways, who was driven far journeys, after he had sacked Troy's sacred citadel.

Fagles: >Sing to me of the man, Muse, the man of twists and turns driven time and again off course, once he had plundered the hallowed heights of Troy.

Claude: >Tell me the man, Muse — the man of many turnings, who was driven wandering far, once he had sacked Troy's holy citadel

Combining "man of many ways" and "man of twists and turns" into "man of many turnings" is just dreck.

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