But it is more than a writing style becoming cliched with overuse, it is unreadable. See this from the site.
"One band per run length, your last five presses at the top. Every grain is one time you made that run." This was never good writing. It is weird compaction. It is just hard to picture this. It's as if this does not know that we have shared visual attention at the moment on a particular graph and is instead looking at some bizarre version of it while I am looking at/picturing something else. Maybe that's what it is, it does not get good explanation as a moment by moment transfer of understanding.
This is clearly Opus 5 speak, which was truly maddening. I wonder if they regenerated it today with 5.5 it would be more bearable?
The other sin is just a lack of editing. There’s no way the text needed to be so long for such a simple premise.