zurfer posted the original quote, nostrebored's faux-quote is the rewritten version.
The second version is definitely clearer. It's unclear to me if the original tried to convey a nuance that is lost on me, or if it's really just ego-stroking, over-complicated, writing for the sake of it.
zurfer posted the original quote, nostrebored's faux-quote is the rewritten version.
The second version is definitely clearer. It's unclear to me if the original tried to convey a nuance that is lost on me, or if it's really just ego-stroking, over-complicated, writing for the sake of it.