alt Hacker NewsI see your point! But there’s an issue specific to QR codes here.
See, if you generate a code and it works for you, you generally expect it to work for other QR readers as well. If all you want to create a QR code for yourself to use (say, to deactivate an alarm with a code, or a Wi-Fi code for your guests to connect maybe, this should be fine. However, things like this will inevitably be used in production, and it would be really bad if, say, a QR code gets printed on a million copies of something and turn out to only work for some users.
I agree that we should support new projects and not choke them down with overly negative commentary. However, piling up positivity doesn’t help either: your second example doesn’t feel genuine to me, more like a spam review in app store or something. I love the sandwich approach in your first one though!
How about this: “Cool project! Some styles are really nice, I didn’t know you can make QR codes like this ever work. However, when I tried reading them with [app name] scanner app, only a few styles actually worked for me. Perhaps it works with other scanners, but this one has [99M+] downloads last month [/ active user base or something]. So if you want to use those be sure to check it works everywhere, and maybe stick to more plain styles? I also hope this gets addressed in the qrframe itself – perhaps tweaking the contrast in styles [X] and [Y] a bit would help.”
It is still way too fluffy IMO, but much more substantial. It is harder to write, of course.
I think you're underestimating the importance of positivity. But aside from that: really? the one where the guy technical deep dives to solve some problem, seemed like a spam review to you, in the context of HN? How do you figure?
They're both genuine from me, one way I might write one. I feel sorry for you that you didn't feel that genuine emotion, or see the utility, but I'm glad you got something from it, hopefully it can help you write better ones in future!
Just curious: have you done many Show HN's yourself? You might be finding it hard to empathize with the uniqueness of that without having some experience doing it.
Regarding the drafts: first one's not really sandwich as much as genuinely owning "maybe this is my setup" (total correct), and expressing love for this cool project.
I like your one, it's a good start. I think focusing clearly on your test set up and expressing positivity is enough. Making recommendations or suggestions runs the risk of making too many unfounded assumptions about intended use, and clouding the market with unfounded restrictions when in reality you don't have the research to back that up. So, temper your pronouncements to the quality of your data, I guess, otherwise you might come across as gratuitously negative or fault finding, as OP here, even if not in "tone" per se, then in harmful effect (authoritative dismissal dimming engagement, etc).
Another way to say it might be: don't overestimate your ability to see real limitations, while underestimating your ability to harm a project or creator with the same.
These ideas, are they all really so shocking? If so, glad I could help bring a bit more light to the Show HNs by prompting some reflection!! :)